Words In Flight Banner

Structure McLaughlin's "Birds of Good omen for Sandra" is one of his "poems that read themselves." The words appear and disappear on the screen without the option of reader control. After I had read / viewed this poem several times, I decided I'd like to write it down in order to be able to look at any part of the poem at any time that I wanted. I thought this was ironic as the hypertext medium has often been thought of as one in which different sections of a piece are inherently reorderable.

This poem resists that idea in that it is basically one big animated gif and it just runs. It cannot be paused, lines cannot be reread at will; it is an entity, and in order to review any small part of it, one most review it in its totality. In order to write it down, ultimately, I viewed the piece about thirty-five to fourty-five times, able to write only about one or two lines down at a time before having to restart it. By the end of this process, I had most of the poem memorized, and at pace with the change of the lines on the screen. Thus, even though the poem seems to resist the reader's control or involvement, I became very invested in it.

I think I felt almost challenged to delve into it. This might possibly be because of the seemingly resistant facade, or as a result of the calm pace and visual openness; the text is small and black and appears in a large white space with birds lining the left side, slightly fading out.

© 2000 Shari Margolin